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ENG216 QCQ#5

Quotation: “The acute pain which shot up his back forced a short cry from him; and, when bird and beast are hushed into rest and the stillness of night is over all, a high-pitched sound, like the voice of pain, is carried far in the quiet air. Ruth, speeding on in her despair, heard the sharp utterance, and stopped suddenly short. It did what no remonstrance could have done; it called her out of herself. The tender nature was in her still, in that hour when all good angels seemed to have abandoned her. In the old days she could never bear to hear or see bodily suffering in any of God’s meanest creatures, without trying to succour them; and now, in her rush to the awful death of the suicide, she stayed her wild steps, and turned to find from whom that sharp sound of anguish had issued”. (Gaskell, Chpt.8)

Comment: This quote comes from chapter 8 after Ruth realizes that Mr. Bellingham has left her for good. While it isn’t stated explicitly that Ruth is pregnant until a little later in the novel, she is still being ostracized by the community as a “fallen woman”. This passage has a lot of connotations of sinfulness and redemption that I found interesting. Ruth has been led into a committing a variety of sins so far, such as her  living arrangement with Mr. Bellingham, and is about to commit suicide, which is considered a sin in most sects of Christianity. Mr. Benson, in this scene, acts as a means towards redemption, which is heightened by his religious affiliations. As the passage says, Ruth is “called out of herself” and is moved to help Mr. Benson. This act, performed by a character who has gone against the status quo of Victorian society and would very well be villainized, seems to redeem herself and move closer to a “purer” life by helping the minister. 


Questions: I’m curious as to why Gaskell made Mr. Benson a dissenting minister and how that role will play out later in the novel. By moving away from the Church of England, does that make Mr. Benson a “sinner” in the eyes of English society at the time? If so, does his religious standing take away from Ruth’s redemption?

ENG216 QCQ#4

Quotation: “Provided always, and be it enacted, That no Order shall be made by virtue of this Act whereby any Mother against whom Adultery shall be established, by Judgment in an Action for Criminal Conversation at the Suit of her Husband, or by the Sentence of an Ecclesiastical Court, shall have the Custody of any Infant or Access to any Infant, any thing herein contained to the contrary notwithstanding.” (Custody of Infants Act, 2)

“In Wellesley v. The Duke of Beaufort  (2 Russ. Rep. I), (which however goes beyond any previous case), very gross misconduct was imputed to the father ; he had harboured an adulteress in his own residence; and the separation between him and his children had originally begun with his own deliberate consent. Here, the adulteress has never been brought to the father’s house, nor into contact with the children; aid, in such a case, adultery is not a sufficient ground for separating the children from their father” (Rex v. Greenhill, 5)

Comment: I thought that these two quotes demonstrated the double standard of women and men’s legal rights (especially those pertaining to child custody). The first quote, I believe, says that women who are accused of adultery cannot have custody of their children. However, the second quote from Rex v. Greenhill says that since the adultress was never in contact with the children, the father was allowed custody of his children, despite the fact that he had committed adultery. I think the juxtaposition of these quotations basically summarizes Victorian society. Men, it seems, were practically allowed to do whatever they wanted, even if the laws prohibited it. On the other hand, if women were anything less than perfect, their limited rights could be stripped away. 

Questions: I’m really wondering what the catalyst was for the change in women’s legal rights after the Victorian era. While we’re already seeing dissent from Bodichon’s summarization of rights and from Bronte’s novel, I’m curious about when the women’s rights movement started to gain traction and momentum.

LIL420 Journal #3

Prompt: For Journal #3 Look back over your past humanities courses and assignments and identify three to four of the following: most memorable work(s) you encountered, questions you still think about, a sample of your work you’re most proud of or one you wish you could do over. Write a post that describes what you did then and what you notice about that work now. You’ll drawn from this initial “inventory” (to anticipate a term from Newstok) when you select a revision project.

Response:

  1. Most Memorable Work: I think my most memorable work was probably a short story I wrote in Jesse Miller’s advanced fiction writing course. It was my first time being in a course where people were as passionate and serious about writing as I was, so I wanted to really try and do my best on our first assignment. The short story I wrote was title, “Allan Nash”. It was set in the 1960s and focused on the protagonist, Allan, and his relationship with one of the old men he delivers newspapers to. At the time, I got a lot of nice comments and helpful critiques that helped me grow as a writer. Even though my final assignment in Professor Miller’s class was to revise this story, I feel like there are things I can change to improve it. One of the biggest things I wish I could change regards the characters. I feel like I tried to include too many people and too many subplots to make a meaningful work, yet I’m proud of the dialogue.
  2. Questions I Still Think About: Last spring, I took a course with Dr. Frank called “Victorian Monsters”. During this course, we would look at monster literature from the Victorian era and analyze their themes. A question that came up a lot during class discussions was, “What makes something a monster?”. To answer this question, the class did weekly QCQs on books/materials we read. The QCQs I created brought up a lot of questions for me based on different quotations and my comments to them. I won’t list all of the questions I had, but one that still sticks with me from this course was about how monster literature changed readers’ perceptions of sexual assault and if it had allowed individuals during the Victorian era to freely talk about those issues without it seeming “monstrous”. When looking back at the QCQ assignments, I noticed that I asked a lot of questions regarding Victorian society, so that could be something I could look into more.
  3. Work I’m Most Proud Of: The work that I’m most proud of is from an independent study I did with Jesse Miller. The goal of the independent study was to look at what goes into writing a novella, such as character design, outlining, finding agents, etc. While working on smaller reflections and exercises, Professor Miller had me write about 70 pages of a novella. The novella I wrote is called “Caim and Abel”. It follows a man, named Abel, as he tries to navigate his life while being haunted by a demon named Caim. I’m proud of this work because it really pushed me to write regularly and to have confidence in my own creative choices. One of the things I noticed when looking back at some of my earlier chapters was just how dialogue heavy it felt, but in the later chapters, the amount of dialogue decreases without losing its meaning.
    • Sample: “It would have been easier if Quinn had been disappointed or angry at me for not going in, but he wasn’t. He never seemed to be angry with me. He never seemed to be disappointed with me. Quinn was nothing but supportive and understanding, even if I didn’t deserve that from him sometimes. Nevertheless, he smiled at me and stretched his arms in the air, soaking in the heat from the sun. God, Quinn was beautiful. He wasn’t necessarily fit, but he was lean, and tall, and his hair practically turned into molten bronze at the hint of sunlight.”
  4. Work I Wish I Could Do Over: Honestly, I really wish I could redo most of my creative writing assignments based on feedback I received. If I wasn’t already working on the second manuscript of “Caim and Abel”, I would say that I would redo that project. I wrote a story in my short fiction writing class that could’ve been better. The story, called “Six Bullets”, was about an FBI-type agent who has her proposal interrupted by assassins. I rewrote it for my final and changed it to focus more on the characters rather than the action side of things, but it still has a long way to go. On the other hand, I took a grant writing course with Professor Miller a few semesters ago. While I got a good grade in the class, I felt like I could’ve done better on the semester-long project. We had to create a nonprofit and went through the grant seeking process step by step. I wish I could redo that project as I feel like my group tried to add too much into our nonprofit, so there was a lot of miscommunication when it came to the writing process.

ENG216 QCQ#3

QCQ #3: Bronte Chapters 34-End

Quotation: “There! You’ll find nothing gone but your money, and the jewels, and a few little trifles I thought it advisable to take into my own possession, lest your mercantile spirit should be tempted to turn them into gold. I’ve left you a few sovereigns in your purse, which I expect to last you through the month; at all events, when you want more you will be so good as to give me an account of how that’s spent”…“you thought to disgrace me, did you, by running away and turning artist, and supporting yourself by the labour of your hands, forsooth?” (Bronte, ch.40, 408-409).

Comment: This section was a perfect example of how a wife’s property was essentially her husband’s during this time. Specifically, this section made me think about Bodichon’s summary of the, “Laws Concerning Married Women”. The wording in the quotation above practically matches Bodichon’s summarization on page 4, “What was her personal property before marriage, such as money in hand, money at the bank, jewels, household goods, clothes, etc., becomes absolutely her husband’s, and he may assign or dispose of them at his pleasure whether her and his wife live together or not”. The second part of Huntington’s quote is about Helen earning a profit from her paintings. The language he uses, such as “disgrace”, was prominent, as it represents the attitudes men had regarding a woman’s independent wealth. It reminded me of the discussion our class had about the ideas of “protection” and “providing” from a male point of view. Clearly, Huntington is distraught over losing control over Helen, because he would have to face the social ramifications of his wife having her own source of income.

Questions: Huntington is obviously a bad husband/person (seen through his constant emotional/verbal abuse of Helen), but I wonder if there were any male critics that empathized with him when the novel was published. As said above, as men had the social pressure of providing/protecting their wives, there were probably some male readers that could rationalize Huntington’s feelings during this scene.

LIL420 Journal #2

Prompt: Part 1: We’ve been working towards a definition of the Humanities. For your second journal entry, think about how you’d explain their significance/why the humanities matter: what do you feel you gain personally by studying and working within the humanities? What do you think you gain professionally? What do you think of claim(s) for the broader social value of the humanities? Use Helen Small’s introduction to The Value of the Humanities as a starting point for your response. Part 2: Part 2 may feel somewhat disconnected, but one of our course goals is precisely to create bridges from your academic study to your professional work. Write a brief description of the kind of work you enjoy doing and/or think you’re well equipped to do. If you could invent your own job, what would it be? What kind of job is this, or what is the main purpose of this job? What kind of tasks would you perform? Which of your skills, training, or experiences would this job call on? How might you explain how your undergraduate study (including your humanities degree) has prepared you for it? In general, you want to think about the nature of the work, its specific responsibilities, the environment you’d work in, who you’d work with, and your qualifications and temperament/disposition.

Part 1: The introduction to Helen Small’s, The Value of the Humanities is primarily comprised of defenses for humanities. Many of these defenses discuss the meaning and (obviously) the value of the humanities within cultural, societal, and political contexts, yet I was drawn to Small’s third defense. The “least trusted line of defense” of the humanities regards the contribution the humanities make to our individual and collective happiness (Small, 5). This can also go along with her ideas of the humanities’ ‘intrinsic value’ on page 6. The humanities, unlike natural sciences, have meaning because of the people who engage with them. The passion and values that people assign to disciplines within the humanities are endless. Explanations and theories can never truly be right or wrong, as the humanities allow for a variety of viewpoints. In a personal sense, studying various disciplines within the humanities has not only brought me a sense of happiness and belonging (similar to Small’s third defense), but it has also helped me grow into a multi-faceted individual. I can see problems in the world that can have multiple solutions and consequences for different groups of people, and I honestly feel as though I’ve grown more empathetic towards people that I don’t necessarily agree with in political, ideological, or social settings. I think that my personal gains are also valuable within a professional context. I’m able to work with others and mediate problems that arise by looking at each solution carefully. Especially within an interdisciplinary context, the humanities has challenged me to use critical thinking skills and different areas of my brain that I feel I am able to adapt to different professional environments and ways of thinking. As our discussion said last week, the humanities, unlike sciences, is expansive and can bring heighten our perspectives and ways of viewing the world around us.

Part 2: I’m not sure I have a great answer to this prompt. My dream job isn’t exactly a job, but it’s something that I feel well-equipped to do. I want to be an author and publish books/works that mean something to people. I love creating characters, worlds, and problems that people can get lost in, especially when they need an escape from the world around them. It feels a little silly to write it out, as it feels like I’m a kid answering the question: “What would you like to be when you grow up?” I don’t know if I can really say what the purpose of writing is. For me, I think the purpose of writing (in the context of fictional works) is to connect readers to different ideas/themes/people/settings that they may not be exposed to in their day to day lives. If I were to answer in a regular conversation, I guess I’d say that there really isn’t a purpose to writing (again, in the context of fictional works. Non-fiction works have a purpose in exploring and passing on ideas/knowledge). I write because it feels right. It makes me feel whole and it’s something I genuinely love, even when the process of rewriting, drafting, editing, researching, and rewriting again gets frustrating. I’ve had a lot of experiences and classes regarding creative writing (and writing in general). The classes I’ve taken at UNE have ranged from creative non-fiction to grant writing, which emphasizes the variety of writing forms. Classes such as these have enabled me to take on different forms of writing without sacrificing my own personal voice. As an interdisciplinary studies major, I’ve taken many classes in the English, history, and philosophy disciplines as well as many natural science courses. This variety has forced me to use different parts of my brain and helped me understand different viewpoints and ways of thinking. As a writer, an interdisciplinary background not only helps me create plotlines, but also helps me develop realistic characters that have rich backgrounds and ways of viewing the world. It also helps me write characters with identities different than my own. Most of the time, writing is solitary, but I’ve learned how to incorporate others into the process through my classes with Professor Miller. The act of writing can be accomplished alone, but I’d love a space to collaborate with others through editing, brainstorming, or reading sessions.

ENG216 QCQ#2

Quotation: “Don’t boast, but watch. Keep a guard over your eyes and ears as the inlets of your heart, and over your lips as the outlet, lest they betray you in a moment of unwariness. Receive, coldly and dispassionately, every attention, till you have ascertained and duly considered the worth of the aspirant; and let your affects be consequent up approbation alone. First study; then approve; then love.” (Bronte, 112)

Comment: This quote comes from a section where Helen’s aunt is discussing the prospect of marriage with her. The warnings Helen’s aunt gives may sound ominous and even absurd from a modern perspective, but I believe it’s a good example of the mindset of Victorian women.  Based on the multiple laws outlined by Bodichon, we can see that marriage wasn’t simply a matter of love. Many women needed to weigh their marriage options based on their belongings, financial status, social status, and many other factors. In a society where most, if not all, of the women needed to find husbands, it was critical to find a partner that would let a woman retain some semblance of independence. This quote from Helen’s aunt is evidence of this. She tells Helen to be cold in order to protect herself and to love only when she is absolutely sure that the person is worthy of her. Of course, in later chapters, we see that even if someone were to follow this advice, it isn’t foolproof. 


Question: This conversation between Helen and her aunt probably wasn’t a unique experience. Based on the nature of Bodichon’s summarization and remarks, I wonder how these conversations changed over time. Did women begin to have a more feminist approach to discussing marriage with each other? It also makes me wonder about how men discussed marriage. Based on the quote from Bronte, it seems like these conversations were prevalent for women, but were they as prevalent for men?

LIL420 Journal #1

Prompt: PART 1: During historicizes the term “humanities” in order to arrive at a suitable definition. By discussing what the humanities were, he attempts to describe what the contemporary field (or set of disciplines, or objects of study, etc.) is. Bod et al also work toward a definition of the subject whose history they set out to write. For this post, think about how you would describe the humanities to someone outside this area (how this field is different from, say, the social sciences or natural or physical sciences) AND think about the part of During’s or Bod’s articles that best helps you do this. Feel free to discuss parts of the article that muddy things for you, too. Which ideas might benefit from a little ventilation in class discussion? PART 2: Your annotations and work in Part 1 lay the groundwork for this activity, so this is a short one. Focus on “Projects” (p. 25) in Harris and write a paragraph that “expresses your understanding of [During’s and/or Bod’s] project.” Harris wants you to paraphrase and use at least one direct quotation. Makes sense. Since you’re reading two attempts to define the humanities, consider finding passages to make a text-text connection between the two pieces, and/or use one piece to note differences between the two projects: how does reading one article clarify what the other is trying to do?

Part 1: There isn’t one true definition for what the humanities are, as the term “humanities” denotes different subjects in multiple different countries. With an American point of view, I consider humanities to be the study of subjects that enhance our worldview while also leaving room for various interpretations of evidence, whether that be from historical and cultural studies, or from primary sources like literature or art. As During says, “there is no “idea of the humanities”. There is instead a humanities world: a loosely linked conglomeration of practices, interests, comportments, personae, moods, purposes, and values, and the various settings which these practices, interests, and so on inhabit” (During, 2). This is evident in the inconsistencies regarding the humanities throughout the world. Bod gives multiple examples of the humanities on a global scale, from a Westernized viewpoint to Islamic scholarship and Chinese practices (Bod, 3-4). Considering the multiple definitions and viewpoints regarding what the humanities truly are and what they encapsulate, I think that there isn’t a correct definition, or rather, all definitions are correct. It makes me wonder about the scope of how interdisciplinary the humanities are. If the humanities are interdisciplinary, is there a point where we have draw a line between it and social/natural/physical sciences or is there a way that humanities can be all-encompassing?

Part 2: Both the During and Bod pieces insinuate that there is no true definition of the humanities. However, where as During takes a broad approach to the humanities, Bod discusses cultural differences in how we attempt to define it. One of During’s attempted definitions states, “We must allow that the humanities can potentially focus on anything at all: things, texts, actions, performances, natural forces, individuals, animals, concepts, artworks, moods, money, beliefs, social structures, and so on” (During, 4). The claim that anything can be considered a part of the humanities is something that Bod touches upon, though not as explicitly. Bod attempts to ground the reader through Wilhelm Dilthey’s definition of the humanities, “Rather than explaining (erklaren) the world in terms of countable and measurable regularities, the humanities attempt to understand (verstehen) the intentions of historical actors; the specific objects investigated by the humanities are “the expressions of the human mind” (Bod, 3). After this grounding, Bod discusses the concept of humanities, especially from areas outside of Europe and America. Similar to the definition posed by During above, Bod’s recounting of humanities in a cultural/global context supports the idea that the focus of the humanities can be “anything at all”.

ENG216 QCQ#1

A Brief Summary, in Plain Language, of the Most Important Laws Concerning Women: Barbara Leigh Smith (Bodichon)

Quotation: “This [a vinculo matrimonii] divorce is pronounced on account of adultery in the wife, and in some cases of aggravated adultery on the part of the husband. The expenses of only a common divorce bill are between six hundred and seven hundred pounds, which makes the possibility of release from the matrimonial bond a privilege of the rich.” (Bodichon, page 6)

Comment: This quotation comes from the section on page six titled, “Separation and Divorce”. While Bodichon discusses two types of divorce, one being a separation and the other “an entire dissolution of the bond of matrimony”, she discusses the latter in more detail. I was unaware that couples could not get a “full” divorce unless they involved the House of Commons and the House of Lords. However, what I found most surprising was how expensive it was for couples to get a “common divorce bill”. As Bodichon states, the price makes divorce a “privilege of the rich”. This makes me think of how many women were unable to get a divorce because of the cost. I also think that the laws dictating divorce as well as property can serve as an explanation as to why some women remained single. 


Question: I wonder if women in lower classes found other ways to get around divorce bill expenses. I’m also curious as to what the divorce process looked like for couples who didn’t align with the Church of England, as they may not have held the same beliefs regarding the sanctity of marriage.

Revision Reflection

The story I revised was Six Bullets. The original story followed an FBI agent named Reyes on a date with her girlfriend, Penny. During the date, Reyes was planning to propose, but they were interrupted by a gang, resulting in a shootout. I had a lot of fun writing the story, but there was a lot of confusion about some technical aspects of the story, such as why Reyes ran out of bullets and why the fight had gone on for so long (I originally wrote that the shootout had lasted for about an hour). The biggest concern was about the story itself. A lot of people questioned what the story was really about. Some focused a lot on the physical fight and said that the story was about a shootout rather than the relationship between Reyes and Penny. Others said that the story was strictly about that relationship and that the shootout was just a background. It really made me think about the story I wanted to tell. Another big concern was how well the story fit in a short-story format. For my revision, I decided to stick with the relationship of Penny and Reyes, but I also wanted to include some of the messy aspects that had been hinted at the beginning of the original story (like Penny being irritated at Reyes’s line of work). It was a “kill your darlings” sort of moment, but I found that the best way to revise this story was to essentially reimagine it. The FBI subplot and the shoot-out was scrapped, though I included a metaphorical date revolver within the revision. The revision focuses a lot more on the actual relationship of Penny and Reyes, highlighting the flaws of both characters and how their views of the relationship change throughout the night. I think the biggest change, besides the whole rewrite, was having Reyes become a fully-fleshed character. She obviously loves Penny, though she has no filter and can be impulsively hurtful just to make herself feel better. I also feel that Penny is more of a character in this version than in the original. In the original, Penny was pretty much a side character, but this time, she feels more like an initial antagonist, even if the audience agrees with her by the end of the story. There’s definitely more revision to do with the story, as I feel like I could have developed their relationship more. A future revision that I’d like to explore would be starting the story earlier in the night so the readers could see Penny’s initial frustration. In terms of this version, I feel like this revision makes the story fit better in a short story format than the original, though I’d like to revisit the original concept at some point, just for fun! Overall, I’m happy with the choices I made for this revision and I feel that it better reflects the main themes of the story.

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